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All Comments on 'A Place Beyond The Horizon Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very good story. Excellent character definition and dialog too. I can't wait for Aidan's meeting with Rosa. Also I wonder how he is going to deal with Kat while he is flying off.

Five big stars.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Pace of story is too slow and the pace of chapter release is too slow as well.

sumnermartinsumnermartinabout 1 year ago

I still don't get who Mara really is Or maybe I do and I just don't like her any more.

Rage632Rage632about 1 year ago
Wtf?

His wife cheated, blames him, fucks his friend and still treats him shitty... why is he not divorced yet?

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A Place Beyond The Horizon builds to a climax over the next four chapters as they land in Tokyo. If you want a sneak peak of new chapters, I'm publishing on Wattpad first: https://www.wattpad.com/story/334707193-a-place-beyond-the-horizon It was suggested that I try posting o...