All Comments on 'A Play for Keeps Ch. 01'

highly evocative, as intended. Maybe a bit slow towards the end, but paints a great picture. Love to see more bdsm stuff from you.

I loved this. It so amazingly real and loving. It represents so many of the wonderful things about BDSM so well. It gives me a better understanding of myself and of the ways I can enjoy set with my boyfriend. Also sooo arousing. 5/5

you have intense emotion, insight and, of course, passion woven together here. very nicely done.

Absolutely gorgeous, delightful, vulnerable and tantalising. I loved how you captured the essence of what so many of us love about the Lifestyle. Very much looking forward to reading the next part!

Absolutely amazing! This story has really got everything...anticipation , excitement, passion and so much more. I'm looking forward to reading next part already!