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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very nice

Great beginning. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting

This seems like it's going to be a great new series, but what happened to the Vox Dominus series?

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctoralmost 4 years ago
nicely done

The only think i would suggest is more detail. But that is just my personal view. Well written.

zena99zena99almost 4 years ago
Tremendous Start

I will enjoy seeing how this proceeds. I think I have an inkling of the new plan.

RootOfTheStoryRootOfTheStoryalmost 4 years ago
Exceptional Work

Strong voice and character identity, and the fun is not spoiled by seeing Poe's perspective. Even if he comes in later in the story, this first chapter from the girls eyes only is alluringly mysterious.

Casteller1985Casteller1985over 3 years ago

nicely written can't wait for chapter 2.

bobphil8787bobphil8787over 3 years ago
Great Story!

Looking forward to Ch. 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Any chance of a chapter 2? This is an enjoyable read

SlvTraynerSlvTrayneralmost 3 years ago

Fine story, which certainly deserves at least a new chapter for each of the other sisters and a finale with the whole harem serving as his maids!

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