All Comments on 'A Pledge of Purity Ch. 01'

Twisted, yes, certainly.

However, as hot as fuck.

A wonderful beginning I truly loved it. I just love the way you started the story and the ending was truly special. So please continue the story as I can't wait to see what they will do next!!!!

Amazing story... would love more

good start to the story , love to see the daughter become eventually the complete mirror of what she wanted , including having lesbian sex like her mother lol

Really fantastic. It accurately explored what physical love is. Thanks for sharing.

ALLIE IS A FREAKIFIED LITTLE BITCH

Sorry can't get the picture of 34ddd tits out of my head. Gag or laugh, not sure but I stopped reading right then. One deformed girl does nothing good. I probably will skip over all your stories from fear of more of the same.

Again and again I urge writers to let the readers imagine their own fantasies, don't push yours on us. If you think watermelons on a girl is sexy cool. I think its gross and I'm the reader. Love to know how that would look in real life.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Concur with rickydean56 thoughts . . .

I don't usually like to do this, preferring instead to let the readers use their imaginations. Since however a couple of readers seemingly have overactive imaginations and think Allie looks freakish.

If you want to see what a girl of Allie's exact size and measurements would look like search for the actress Violet Myers who was the physical model for Allie.

OK. A little over the top on the Baby Jesus and sappy love stuff. Also; in most stories of this ilk where good ol' dad takes his daughter's virginity , there never is description of a ruptured hymen, blood or pain. ??? . . . .

the purity pledge that's actually taken also decries porography and masturbation. Denying him, or anyone, the pleasure of her hymen to be claimed? totally ruined this story... sorry.