All Comments on 'A Policewoman's Secret Ch. 01'

as if cops don't have to take drug tests. As if she couldn't just threaten him. Ridiculous

But where's the rest of it?

Not a bad beginning, but a chapter needs to finish. You didn't get to the end of anything; you just rather abruptly stopped. Patience, patience. Don't submit a piece until it is whole.

A Story where a cop is used rather than being the one that uses and abuses a suspect. Everytime I see a fucking story where some cop stops a car with a married woman in it, and ends up fucking her on the hood of a car, it makes me want to puke. Thumbs up and high fives to ya man.

As a fan of erotic fiction I have seen from time to time great gems of written work. After reading your two page preface, I hope that you will wow your readers with a lengthy set of chapters which will give a wonderful and descriptive story. I for one have been seeking a tale which involves a very busty female police officer doing great descriptive sexual activities. I hope that she is a redhead, since this form of hair color is very under used when it comes to tales of lust.