All Comments on 'A Pool Party - The Prequel'

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NewAgeEroticaNewAgeEroticaabout 6 years ago
Lexie's Future?

It would be great to see this story continue. Maybe Lexie starts to get into her mother's profession?

Mumbo700Mumbo700over 5 years ago
Great story telling

Loved the homespun American way of telling a tale so matter of factly. Loved it - though I had to look up what pasties were! J x

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 4 years ago
Good, Solid Storytelling!

For trailer parkish kids, "going off to college"?

More realistically, continuing to live at home.

Taking some classes at the local community college.

Some eventually graduating from a state college.

A difficult, but achievable path.

My hat is off to them.

I relate to Doug.

KristaMoraneKristaMoraneover 3 years ago
Sweet and Sexy, Tastes like Cherries

Very sweet and sexy coming of age story, JB. I was touching inside and outside my panties the whole time. High school was such a hormone fueled experience of kids fumbling with the fire inside for the first time. You captured the moment.

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