All Comments on 'A Porn Star is Born'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Looks like you got tired

Great story idea and nice build up then.....

Working up the fucking and letting Tyronne pick up the Cam would have been a great way to continue.

Lot's of spin -- the husband, the gangsters, BBC GB videos

So much here.

Write some more

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