All Comments on 'A Present and a Deal Ch. 04'

Can you make this story multi section/Chapter so we dont' have to wait a long time in between?? More description of this fine mature woman, too. The dialogue is good, keep it up. The narrative part is sweet, too. I cant' wait till they get down to some hardcore *****ng but I like how you are going at it now, so far. Great buildup.

This is one of the greatest erotic stories i've ever read. I like the developement, its not to fast and the ideas are great. Only the time between the stories shoud be shorter (but it mustn't be too fast because then it would lose quality)

thanks an i apologise for my english, i'm german :)

good story .. truly njoyed it ..

Sweet!

He's one lucky guy to have a mom that's that interested in his sex life.

Perhaps she is grooming him to be her lover.

Thanks for the good read

Fuck her silly.

As a romantic, I would hope this is how a family could be before time and space break it up. Something to never exist again.

Really enjoying this build up. It's not rushed and big, bang boom over.