All Comments on 'A Price Paid Ch. 01'

I don’t normally rate series till I’ve finished as 90% of them on here are incomplete. However in this type of instance I make an exception. I don’t do rape it’s so far from my thing and it’s not like I could see it coming from the story description.

So I’ll rate your story 1 big fucking star. I wish I could give it zero stars but hey I do what I can.

If you’ve got things like rape in a story and the story is not in a category where that’s expected then you should mention it at the start of the story.

Yes I’m overly sensitive to rape shit and unfortunately because of my sisters I have a right to be. So please just mention it right back at the start of page 1, chapter 1.

Had to skip over the rape scene... too many women have suffered it for me to enjoy it as entertainment. A mage can get compliance and control in other ways... why turn a good Mind Control story into a Nonconsensual/Rape story? You’re much better than that... 2* because the writing is good... would have been 5. Hope to see better things in the later chapters...

There is absolutely no non-consent in this chapter.

That's why it wasn't marked so.