All Comments on 'A Price Paid Ch. 11'

Ok that was a magnificent story. Bryana is a cool and ruthless character, I’m in love.

You should use this world in other stories even if the characters are entirely different.

Any thanks for your time and efforts. I now have to go back and score then all 5 stars. Well except the one that had rape in it with no notice.

Well, Jackspeed, thank you for reading and enjoying, I'll point out that there are several stories in that world should you look on my author's page that include:

"A Bargain Made"

"An Apocalypse Rising"

"A War Dawning"

"Of Hearts Bound"

"A Mage Born"

Outstanding as always. I know it’s a lot of work, but you make it look easy as you apply your gift and spin your tales. 5*

No angels here, I still wish the crime lord had had one final ace up his sleeve, someone primed to kill their child in the even all his other plans failed

after all the "good" guys in this story had no problem with rape and torture