All Comments on 'A Pricktease Is Punished'

You got the tit size really wrong. The higher the number the higher the circumference around the body. '40' would just be really reall fat. You'd be best taking it down to a 34DD or even 32DD (like Jordan the glamour model) - which is what a skinny (115lb) would have as a circumference

Having shorn the bitchs head, they shouldn't have stopped there. They should have given her several wet shaves, and then kill her hair roots in order to make it a permanent reminder of her punishment. Why not doing her crotch as well while being at it? Perhaps even some more changes for her slut makeover... (like tattoos, piercings, branding, ...)

I fucking loved the story - onlyt missed out on the details and on all the cum covering her beautiful looks... you hsould have included some more details on that (and yes the tit size shoiuld have been a 32 or 34 DD) else I really liked it. There is nothing like a teenage revenge for stolen boyfriends-)

A 19" dick ? More than a bit far fetched. The minute I read about a huge one like that, I lost interest. But the bitch got what she asked for.

She was a little cockteaser and finally got what she asked for. Teen girls can be wicked in their revenge. Good for them.

Comment on previous OP's tit size comment - 40 is not "real fat" - get real - where have you been? LA?

19" cock is wishful thinking - 10 - 12" is Hung.

Regardless of those details - I LIKED the story a lot. Would've liked some sexy talk, sound effects from the guys fucking her. But, all in all, I liked it. I will Definitely read more from this guy!!

*snort* 19" dick indeed. According to Masters & Johnson, about one male in one thousand has an erect penile length of 9". About one in ten thousand is 10" when fully erect so I figure a 19" pud is one in a billion. I would guess a dick that big would be a problem since trousers, urinals, toilets, etc. aren't engineered for a foot+seven inch schlong. I have to wonder about circulatory problems during erections.

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Insofar as the literary value of this story goes, it's not very good. The prose is mediocre, there's little of interest to the storyline, and the characters aren't individuals I'd care about. Ho-hum fiction at best.

I didn't check out, but this must be one of your earlier stories. It isn't as good as the other ones I read.

Great story mate is really like how you played out the prick tease into a a total slut over a few days great stuff man. Write more

That's impossible to get up a vagina, 12 inches is max, an thats with chinese girls :)

Your stories really make my dirty cunt drip. I love fucking myself while reading your stories and imagining how you would humiliate me in person.