by paralleltasking
Shame this story had potential to go place but the endding stop it. But great idea overall
This story was spectacular! I was surprised at how affective your pacing is considering how dense your story elements are. You have a real talent for a single line teasing so much. Thanks for your work.
Overall I kind of enjoyed the story but that ending was disappointing. This actually had the potential to do a multi multi-part story. I mean if you could rework the ending it would be better maybe only have one of them come to him saying she pregnant. And have her mention that several other we're showing signs in it would have been better. Also statistically speaking a 40-year-old man would not have been able to do cum that many times in a day. And it did give me a few chuckles. And two weeks is kind of a short time to have a positive test
People here are being way too harsh on an extremely well-written tongue-in-cheek sex story. This succeeds in everything it wants to be. Amazing.