All Comments on 'A Private Dance Ch. 03'

Things are shaping nice at the Mason mansion even if David might end up with broken legs thanks to Anthony or stabbed in some alley thanks to Louie. There are real feelings and emotion at play here and even if mostly through sex it is fun to see them grow closer and closer. Hopefully the happy moment when either one shout "I love you" isn't far off.

Easily a 5!

Mmm so juicy, hopeless romantic here please continue their story with a happy after.

I do like the way you describe each of the characters inner voices, doubts, for they are all very realistic feelings surrounding loss.

Great story hope there's many chapters and a happy ending.