All Comments on 'A Prize Worth Winning'

Unreadable. What's with throwing commas in at random in all the wrong places and missing them out when they are needed? Appalling writing. There is no way anyone can read 16 pages of this drivel.

Horrible. Nice premise, but horrible execution.

I didn’t rate it, as I only read to the end of the first section. The idea was good, and had a little novelty, but the writing was just too difficult to read. The first section was almost entirely a third person description which is OK if kept to a paragraph or two at the beginning. Combine this with the fact that I didn’t find a single sentence without an error, of wrong words, words in the wrong place, or punctuation making the reader stop all the time to check what was meant…