by dawn1958
This could have been better if it was in 2 or 3 parts rather than one. Anything longer than 2 pages begins to drag on the reader. In the future please try to get the story or chapter into 2 or 3 pages.
Having said that, I hope chapters 4 and 5 are not so long.
Yes, totally love your writing and the story and totally disagree with the request for shorter chapters. Your chapters are perfect, worth at least 3 cums per chapter.
First, yes, I enjoy your tale. Why is Sally forcing Kerri to call her Master? At some point, Kerri needs a collar.
*just grins*
would you shorten a good book because you think it's dragging? would you cut out parts just to make it an easier read for you? Come on.... if a story is good, who cares if it's more than two pages.
that being said.... i have really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading the next chapter. though i must admit, i'm curious to find out what happened with Sky's part in the story? Waiting to see if He'll reign the students in and take back control. Thoroughly enjoying the story. Keep up the great writing.
yes, dawn is a great writer. no to shorter chapters. yes, where is Sky. no to more of this rather impossible interaction with her students.
With such a horny group how is that Kerri wasn't on her back with a stiff cock in her cunt and another in her ass while one of the girl students rode Kerri's face. Would also love to see Kerri squirt her cunt juice as her students lick furiously to drink it all down. How many student faces can lick Kerri's cunt at the same time? How wide can Kerri spread her legs? One of these boys should have a huge purple mushroom cock head that spreads Kerri's mouth to the limit to get into her throat. Then his cock should bulge her throat as it slides down and up and out again as Kerri gags and strings of her spit trail down her chin. Yummy.
Golden Lochs? a loch is a lake in Scotland
I think the word you are looking for is Locks
This is GREAT! Sally has got the mind of the BDSM intelligence. Lori has lesbian tendencies.