All Comments on 'A Prom Story Ch. 01'

Good premise.

Nicely told.

Could have used some slowing down once they were getting naked and were naked.

A little more handling/playing with his cock.

Some dialog where she asked him how long he'd dreamed about her doing this.

Had he jerked off to visions of her? He didn't need to dream any more, now it was real.

More/longer playing with her tits. Directions to teach him what she liked done to/with them.

More preliminaries before going full bore into diving into her pussy.

She could have/should have asked him if he liked the way it looked -- after she'd had it waxed.

Directions on how to eat pussy. Kiss around it. Kiss it. Lick the lips. Take the lips into his mouth and tongue and suck them. Run his tongue up and down without pushing in.

Find the clit. Kiss it. Lick around it. Suck it.

Nevertheless, Five Stars.