All Comments on 'A Properly Trained Tongue Ch. 01'

Dear god....more of this please!!

This is incredibly hot and definitely needs a second chapter. Well done.

Maybe not stuffed with much besides oral sex, but it got me hooked pretty good. Would love to see some more chapters of that one - thanks for the nice story

Don't we live to humour, please and serve the naughty Brandy's of this world, and worship them for spicing up our lives. Mike.

I like her nonverbal actions. Pointing to her pussy, grabbing back of head, telling him to eat the ass. Hot

Love the focus on cunnilingus and analingus (does Brandy ever fuck him, or bother to get him off at all? hope not!), and the playful yet heated tone. Only wish the writing were a little cleaner, with fewer typos and less "creative grammar." Still a nice job.

Probably not to everyone's taste (pardon the pun) but I enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to write.

A little DEVIL

Kinda lame. No plot. Boring sex. But I never tell writers they suck like some commentors do. I just say practice makes perfect, so keep trying.