All Comments on 'A Public Argument'

I have missed you, friend!

Do you plan another chapter.

I have accidentally rubbed a few asses in tight quarters and enjoyed the pleasure .

5 stars.

This stands as a fine blueprint. Consider moving it to the next level. Well Done!

A bit out there, but fun?

Definitely!!

4/5

Maya is such a bitch. And she does NOT represent real women.

Maya is a man in a dress. Plus, she's a slut.

Even better the second read

Could use more elaboration on them being surrounded by people on a bus would make story hotter

Excellent story. Thank you.

4Stars

If he story was from Maya’s point of view, with the reader feeling her stubbornness convert to real need, then it would be 5star thx

Totally not believable. But a lot of fun just the same. So 4/5 for this one.