All Comments on 'A Quick One, While He's Away'

One of the best MC stories I’ve read!!! Well done.

Going after a dude's wife is crossing the line. Plenty of single girls out there for the MC artist to get it on with.

Would have preferred an ending that had Jerry punished in a very unpleasant way.

Sexy little story. Good job!

I was kind of hoping Doug had set up some kind of control over Jerry, not to punish him but so he could have some good threesomes for himself, without Jerry ever realizing he had been hypnotized as well.

That was so hot. I loved the fact that Jerry had almost hypnotised himself by getting addicted to it. I also love a MC story that doesn’t have the dude calling the woman a dirty sex slave/slut. As always your writing is incredible

Would've loved some sort of twist, but still enjoyable

More!

Loved the idea of a quickie....almost getting caught....along with the possibility of continued adventures in the future. Ahh, how about hypnotizing Doug?

I love this story, quick and well done...:)