All Comments on 'A Quick Second Go-Round'

loving and being loved, TK U MLJ LV NV

Damn good story.

so did a ghost write this?

I'm crying it was so damn good!! One of the best I've ever read on this site. Kudos!

Anytime soon that is. Sorry for your loss. Young ones come in,clueless us old ones move on, hoping to have done enough. Its sobering to realize were are a small part of a 'the' continuum.

I liked it!!!

like a newspaper article. detached

Beautifully done. One of best I have read on site.

This story could have been written by O' Henry.

Well written, not so much sex but sexy, bit deep but very good.

Never left a comment in the years I've been reading this site. This story was calculated and contrived, but it moved me. Who reads erotica to be moved by any emotion except for lust? Ha ha. Very nicely done. Not what I expected to find here. In the arc of the story, the characterizations, and the repartee, reminded me a bit of Erich Segal's Love Story.

You really want to look at the typos and there was a bit of a bumpy ride for me during some of the dialogue and just after Paris. A little scattered (I get comments like that a lot too). Aside for those minor things I loved the whole premise and your approach. I realized where you were headed half way through but I love the way you pulled it off in the end.

Unlike the other commenters, I've been seeking out the deeper pieces these days. Writing that leaves you thinking a bit, not just about where the tissues are. You were on the favourite author list of another writer I'm enjoying quite a lot, DesmondAndromeda.

I think I'll spend a little more time around your work. I like your style. I hope there's more like this here. Thanks.

Some shorter tales are the best.

Good one. Real good. Made me feel.

This was a good trip ... knew I was on the way ... knew how it would end ... after arriving still felt good.

You are an amazing story teller! I think you are now my clear favorite of all the authors I have read on Literotica and StoriesOnline. I might read 3 to 5 stories by any one author I like, but i am slowly working my way through most of yours. Each one is different. They aren't cookie cutter like most other authors with so many stories. Thank you!!!

Well done. I find I am usually clueless,,but I caught on about ½ way through. I really liked your ending. I’m usually very critical about the lacking of a decent ending, but you nailed it well. 5 stars for this tale.

Bill S.