All Comments on 'A Randy Retirement Pt. 11: Megan'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Well done, just like the others, but a bit too extreme personally. But please keep up the good work!

Cuthbert125Cuthbert125about 3 years ago

I like this series. Taking his partner to her limit and beyond. The writing is very well done. Story line is clean, well thought out. My only quibble is that leaving Megan on that dildo through the night without monitoring leaves me feeling Randy is a bad and dangerous dom. Granted, this is fantasy, but if this were real, Megan could have experienced serious injury because of neglect. In a later story, he does draw blood. Be more careful.

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