All Comments on 'A Randy Retirement Pt. 18: Maria'

Another chapter in a beautifully written story. All the elements are here for a great read: excellent characters, engaging plot, wonderful love scenes, and a careful buildup throughout. The pacing of the story is very well done, and the ending leaves the reader eager to find out what happens next. Wonderful story telling.

Beautiful! This story is amazing and I can’t wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!

Maria might be my second favorite girl after Halley. Of course, I have a lot more Ellie to read coming up after this, so she might take over one of those spots, but regardless she's very likely to be a top 3 for me. Wish there was future chapters for her.