All Comments on 'A Reckless and Loving Arrangement'

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lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

good, sad, erotic, and beautiful

Pussy_WhispererPussy_Whispererabout 1 year ago

The father supplanted the son completely in seconds and he and the daughter had mind blowing sex. It's just a matter of time for people with such low scruples to cheat again. The father is a piece of shit for seducing her.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great story but too many unnecessary Grammer as if the writer was obsessed with English

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.