All Comments on 'A Regency Ravishment'

Please write a part two.

I hope Oliver is not dead yet.

Amazing, looking forward to part 2!

Please let her come out on top, he is too cruel to he allowed to win at the end.

Thank you for your comments everyone! I wasn't able to incorporate the feedback since part 2 was published soon after this one, but I've made a note of it and for people who don't like guys like Wentworth, there's always Phillip from A Regency Seduction to cleanse your palate.

Thank God she fucked up that bastard. Oliver needs to be brought down a peg. Anne is a good person and Oliver needs to show her true aftercare if he wants her

This story suffers from a serious case of telling instead of showing. Perhaps the author could expand the earlier sections so we didn't feel like we were being hit round the head with exposition. Also, Wentworth is a gross MMC who needs to die already. I get the allure of old timey bodice rippers, but none of those heroes were this cruel. Also, why did you use the names of the beloved characters from Persuasion?