All Comments on 'A Reluctant Sex Instructor Ch. 07'

Repost from blog: Important Note From Author:

Note: I’ve previously mentioned the college sorority “La Pute” in Chapter 3. But I’ve decided to retcon (retrospectively revised) to reintroduce La Pute again in this chapter since I’ve not talked about it since.

Many things that happened in RSI Chapter 7 were inspired by events in my life. Even the character Molly was inspired by someone I know. (For that matter, all the girls in RSI are inspired by people or a combination of people I know).

With my swinger/non-monogamous background, many readers cannot relate to the events in RSI. So this post will provide some references to help you visualize better:

=Image of Skimpy Romper=

If you can’t visualize what Molly’s romper looks like, here are a few references:

- https://www.aliexpress.com/i/32977658215.html

- https://nbeasyget.en.made-in-china.com/product/PXcmQaFuTJAr/China-Women-Sexy-Lingerie-Satin-Bodysuit-Teddy-Babydoll-One-Piece-Halter-Sleepwear-Deep-V-Neck-Jumpsuit-Backless-Nightwear-Esg14159.html

- https://elevateswag.com/products/deep-v-backless-halter-rompers

=Tail Plugs=

There are a lot of images of girls wearing tail plugs on Reddit. You can go to r/tailplug to check them out (filter by the top view and all-time).

Here are some links:

https://www.reddit.com/r/tailplug/top/?t=all

- https://www.reddit.com/r/tailplug/comments/g8pcx6/been\_a\_foxy\_girl\_since\_tumblr\_2013\_ihatethebeach/

- https://www.reddit.com/r/tailplug/comments/liby7f/master\_please\_make\_my\_pussy\_purr/

=Others=

This chapter features more character development from Ken and more backstory of various characters. It answers some questions readers have been asking and “close the loop” on some of the things I’ve brought up previously.

Truth be told, I wasn’t satisfied with how the chapter turned out. The writing seems subpar compared to the earlier chapters. The prose felt stiff and doesn’t flow as well as before. I pride myself on making my stories as easy to read as possible, so I was very reluctant to publish Chapter 7.

I’ve also introduced new characters and I had spent a lot of time trying to figure out their unique personalities without making them sound like cardboard characters. I like to think that dialogues are one of my strengths as a writer, but the dialogues in this chapter still feel a little off (despite countless of revisions).

But with readers bombarding me for updates, I decided to go ahead and publish this new chapter despite not being fully satisfied with it. Maybe I will go back and edit this chapter again when I’m in a better writing mood.

Still, I hope you enjoy it. Let me know how I did in this chapter.

=Reasons for the delay=

In case you haven’t read my previous post, there were several reasons for the long delay in this chapter:

(1) The last quarter of the year tend to be my busiest in work

(2) Plus, I was sick for a couple of weeks, so I couldn’t focus on writing.

(3) As I’ve mentioned above, I felt the writing was subpar, so I kept editing it.

Usually, I’d take around 10-20+ rounds of revision/edits after the 1st draft, though this time, I went through at least 20-30+ revisions, not counting the additional revisions I made after it went through the editors.

This new chapter has 22k words, so it takes at least an hour to read through it. Now multiply that by 20 times, excluding the time spent actually editing.

That’s the amount of editing that goes into each chapter!

(4) It took me a long time trying to figure out the personalities of the new characters.

Whenever possible, I try not to have too many major characters in my stories, as it can be difficult to keep track of them after a while. So I try to make each character as distinct as possible, coming back with their unique voice, character traits, and background.

But doing it can take a lot of effort. Besides brainstorming their character information, I also need to consider how their personalities would play a part in the story.

I’m interested to hear what you think of the new characters in this chapter.

==Poll Results==

I’m severely behind in posting the poll results. But if you haven’t answered the poll questions, feel free to send them in (see my earlier blog post or in the comments below).

Anyhow, please let me know what you think of the new chapter.

Enjoy!

It's a Japanese erotic massage, but we haven't had much time, so this is going to be a short version.

I think this is supporting be got much time?

Either way loved the chapter and what it’s setting up for the future, with both the dim/sub stuff and cuddle parties, in top of the now fivesome. Ezra and Molly have both been great new characters, can’t wait to see from them!

@kitten_x I don't understand what you're trying to say in the first part of your comment. Are you saying that there's actually time? The nuru massage in this scene is a short version, but the actual full standard massage.

Thanks for your kind comment, there are a lot of spicy things developing.

End note from Author: Thanks for reading!

Please leave your vote and feedback to let me know how I’m doing. They will inform me how much time and effort I should invest in this story. Or if my time is better spent doing something else instead of continuing the story. Life is too short to write stories that people are not interested in.

Welcome back! This series just keeps getting better. Can’t wait for the next chapter! (

Hope he’ll end up with Lisa but in a polyamorous relationship)

What's not to like.?! As I've said before your writing style is unique and your description of characters and situation is makes me think its happening right in front of my eyes. I want this to be a long most popular series, so please keep writing <3

Currently, we're around the mid point of Book 1 (in terms of story, not chapter or word count), so there's plenty let to write. I've planned at least three books for RSI, though we'll see if this is popular enough for me to continue Book 2 and 3

Well you do write a lot of words, sometimes you over write, sometimes you get it right, plenty of things to think about, good bad and indifferent,

I am still trying to make my mind up about how much I like or dislike this, sorry , it’s just one of those stories that have my mind undecided.

I have one critique and one complaint about this story, but before I get to them, I want to say: HECK YEAH KEEP WRITING THIS STORY, IT'S FUCKING AWESOME!!

Now on to my critique. Sometimes your mess up the flow of the story by jumping around too much within the story; I power read through all the chapters, so the most recent example I can think of is the beginning of this chapter. You went from Ezra, to a high school flashback about contraceptives, to a different flashback about Tony, and then back again. I know this isn't a website known for literary masterpieces; but with a story this well written setting such a mistake is a bit jarring.

As for my complaint, it's quite simple... there aren't more chapters. 😅

I hope to see a new chapter soon, until then, good luck.

I love it please please more rsi

First of all I had no idea how much time it takes to write 'just' one chapter. So I want to thank you and all the other contributors that you spend so much time and effort to create this outstanding story for everyone to read.

There are so much things teased in this chapter that would be enjoyable to read (foursome/fivesome, NCPs, NTPs, Ken having a 'real' girlfriend) so I think it would be a pitty if you would stop writing it.

More please

Love it

Love the story and hoping for more. I’ve grown attached to the characters and can’t wait to see how their relationships develop. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I know the headaches and heart aches that are required to create the superb episodes that you have presented so far --- All that we out here on the consumption side can do is to click the stars and ask for more! SO, please allow us to continue the journey with you.

More Please!

A wonderful installation. Cannot wait to see the next chapter. It has been months since your last update. Hope that you are well and still writing.

Loving the story please keep it going

Given the amount of teasing in this series, I'm hoping the year-long quiet period is just an extreme example of the same. No? *sigh* Too bad. After the first segment (which was okay, but needed editing) this story really took off. It would have been nice if it actually fulfilled the promise of its title. Please consider finishing it. In any case, thanks for sharing what you have so far. It takes both courage and generosity to do this.

OKOK Mr. Forrest Einstein… WTF? I was promised to see the Mountain Tops from many different cheeky positions… disappointed doesn’t even begin to say how I feel! More DAMIT! U PROMISED!

Great story, loved the rambling back and forth, Ken is a classic version of the male species and his friends area source of trials and tribulations…VERY WELL DONE! Now, I’ve read all the chapters (and expect a classic ending) but until whenever, and I will be watching… I feel, either you are very educated, or you are a perv! Either way, u are definitely one of my favs! How about 60 credits towards my sex therapist degree for reading and life credits, after a little formal ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 training we could go into practice together? Very informative, smart, funny, sad and most of all, entertaining! Great piece of work! I really can wait to finish ur novel! One last request…most would want them all but after all this… I WANT YOU 🥵🤔😊 Be Well BBB

Enjoyed that. Pity the series has dried up.

Hope everything is OK with the author.

Please continue

Continue!!

Please do continue this story! I really like the characters, the main one as well as his friends, and I really want to know how he develops further.

Thanks for all the feedback. The plan has always been to finish the story, eventually. But life happens and it's difficult for me to continue. Hopefully I can at least publish Book 1 of RSL soon.