by NoirABNC
Love it! I can't wait for the next chapters to begin unraveling the mystery.
GREAT STORY! Unfortunately, your editor is not so great. You have a lot of grammatical errors.
I figured Alexander's mom was up to no good...she got nothing on Mommy Dearest that's for sure. I hope after Stephanie gets herself together or at least try to she will talk to Alexander to get some answers. Then they can drop Alexander's mom in the bottom of the ocean mafia style.
Really good, but a little better editing wouldn't hurt. Sorry if I'm being overly critical.
Five.
please continue with this wonderful story. I like the beginning of the story and how I can visualize the characters and their mannerism.
Please update soon.
Said it all in the title. I lied, Grandmummy needs an ASS WHOOPING!!!!!!!!
Did I say damn? Damn I have to say I loved how she hit him even if he didn't have it coming I still loved it. His mother will have to explain a lot that is for damn sure.
Alex's mother is evil and I can't wait for Alex to get his memory back. Awesome story please continue.
good story so far.
And yes, Alexander's mom is evil.
Id strangle someone who did that to me.
Yes! I have found a story that's a diamond among so many lumps of coal here on Lit. More, please. Thank you kindly.
NautiNymph
Hey, just found this story, enjoyed it a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter, hope you bring it out soon.
Wow i cant wait for the next installment. I love this story i am so
happy that i found this story on this website. Five stars and keep up
the great work. Excellent writing skills!!!!!
After reading it the 2nd time. Hope the next chapter comes out soon. Keep up the good work. Just one thing, PLEASE don't make us wait a year for the next chapter.
I really liked the story, any idea on the next chapter
Hoping for the next chapter by now. Please you can't keep us waiting a long time.
If I see the next chapter come out before january 2014. Sorry just saying that from experiance from the other story your writing.
please continue this story. I'm already in love with this story. You have a good story. Please CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!
Oh this is too good!!! I was getting ready to read the next chapter, then noticed that there isn't one :-( really really hope you continue with this. Please!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!! Im already in love with this story!!!! wanna see more!! you really have some good talents. please make another chapter!!
I absolutely LOVE where the story is going it's just unifinshed as of yet. Smh so many great stories discontinued. I hope you are not one of them😄
Ja, was hoping to have read at least 2 or 3 more chapters by now. Really hope the next chapter is worth the long wait, hope its long and a good read. I really like this story, just not the long long long long long wait.
Please update!!!!!!!! This story is so good. What the hell happened to Alex? He obviously has lost all memory of his past with Stephanie.
And we are still waiting for the next few chapters. This has the potential of been a very good story. It just the fans find ourselves waiting and waiting for the next chapter. Can the author at least give a reason on their profile why? Can understand a month or 2 between chapters, not this long.
Good story; I'm hooked. Please finish it and leave us hanging.
Anna
I wish they would not post stories until they were at least almost done. This is taking way to long for updates and I am afraid i will not ever see the rest
This story has started off great!!!! I really would like to see some updates.
If you let your readers hang like this, you don't deserve a good rating.
I'm on the edge of my seat reading you should seriously consider finishing it off !!!!
You tell the story with such a natural flare like its happened to you. I'm
An eager reader please do continue #crying face
I am begging you to PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE!!! Update or finish this story!
I always wonder why the great stories are not finished. This is another duzzy! I think his mother has something to do with him not going back to his family after his accident. How would she feel if she thought her child was dead? That little girl think her dad is dead. What a waste. Please hurry thank you.