All Comments on 'A Reputation Ch. 06 - Locked Out'

by Publius68

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Super fun, I liked the new scenario that allowed you to flex your creativity and humor chops before the actual sex.

redbaron172redbaron172over 1 year ago

Interesting twist..... loved it!!!! good job!!!

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 1 year ago

You do an excellent job of fleshing out characters quickly. 5 stars.

rayironyrayironyover 1 year ago
Yeah; the "Real World"is a damned nuisance sometimes.

You sure can write!...Thanks.

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

He seriously needs to nail his ra and his Russian teacher

theartofdesiretheartofdesireover 1 year ago

Excellent entry. As great as the previous ones have been, the buildup in this one made it even better.

Camguy4funCamguy4funover 1 year ago

Another awesome chapter!

DwarfLord50DwarfLord50over 1 year ago

You made my weekend with this! I’ve been stopping by every few days to check for another chapter and there it was. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this seriez!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a great series! I like the way that each chapter has a different "scene" from the previous ones, which keeps things interesting. You are obviously doing a lot of thinking about each "scene" before writing a chapter. A wonderful effort!

DdaltonDdaltonover 1 year ago

I love this oh so very very believable series .... keep going until it is only barely plausible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Best chapter of this story so far, loving it.

joeoggijoeoggiover 1 year ago

I wanna go to this school. Good read!

JodailyJodaily11 months ago

Toadstool twatwaffles, I like it😊. Kinda catchy. That was arguably the best of the series so far. Gotta say that Will is a real ratbastard. Lucky stiff. Ah,to be 20 again. We're still waiting for him to nail Shawn, but this will hold me over for now.

Nitpicking- lead/led, present/past tense. Often confused.

Still a few typos, but better than last one.

10 stars out of 5. 😋 Well done. Again.

TomNJaxTomNJax10 months ago

This is an outstanding story 👏, great premise and excellent character build in each chapter. Really wish my college time had been one-tenth of "Shower Guy's," I might have enjoyed it...😆

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