by Publius68
Super fun, I liked the new scenario that allowed you to flex your creativity and humor chops before the actual sex.
You sure can write!...Thanks.
Excellent entry. As great as the previous ones have been, the buildup in this one made it even better.
You made my weekend with this! I’ve been stopping by every few days to check for another chapter and there it was. Thanks!
This is a great series! I like the way that each chapter has a different "scene" from the previous ones, which keeps things interesting. You are obviously doing a lot of thinking about each "scene" before writing a chapter. A wonderful effort!
I love this oh so very very believable series .... keep going until it is only barely plausible.
Toadstool twatwaffles, I like it😊. Kinda catchy. That was arguably the best of the series so far. Gotta say that Will is a real ratbastard. Lucky stiff. Ah,to be 20 again. We're still waiting for him to nail Shawn, but this will hold me over for now.
Nitpicking- lead/led, present/past tense. Often confused.
Still a few typos, but better than last one.
10 stars out of 5. 😋 Well done. Again.
This is an outstanding story 👏, great premise and excellent character build in each chapter. Really wish my college time had been one-tenth of "Shower Guy's," I might have enjoyed it...😆