All Comments on 'A Return Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really enjoyed please makea part two

Freerunner6Freerunner6over 1 year ago

Solid story. I would love to see a sequel but, keep writing no matter what

shysuzyshysuzyover 1 year ago

Wow - love this please carry on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great start. Something is going on and has yet to be revealed. The touches and feelings were well described. Good work.

RacerX2023RacerX2023over 1 year ago

Very nice! I understand that this is written from her POV and we don't know how she's being controlled, but I hope that we see it soon. Solid writing and story telling.

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dubious consent appreciator. also a sucker for mind control and things that bend the will

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