All Comments on 'A Revealing Moment'

by JuanSeiszFitzHall

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Caring in a fraught situation. Well written.

OmenainenOmenainenover 1 year ago

Such a lovely, and fun, moment of connection! Thank you for posting this to my event.

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsover 1 year ago

Respect!!! Re-entering the fun zone has got to be difficult for a reshaped woman (or man for that matter). But I like the way you presented re-entry... Slowly, and with fierce determination... And a willing commitment to embrace the new normal. 750- Excellent words my friend!! Good Luck!!

DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

We're they married or lovers? Whatever, a major turning point in their relationship, beautifully handled, well done!

cicadabrocicadabroover 1 year ago

Beautiful story. Applies to many of us. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautiful story. Applies to so many of us. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

750 word project: what a terrible idea!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

very brave

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

good job with a tough subject

yowseryowserover 1 year ago

Daring, different, lovely.

DesertRat681DesertRat681over 1 year ago

Excellent! Love makes her beautiful and sexy. Even after 38 years, just looking at has the same effect. For when I look at her I always see the person I love more than all others. You did very well with this!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done!!!

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumover 1 year ago

Ha d. Similar experience with late wife.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 1 year ago

Excellent short tale. True love accepts each other's scars. Physical and emotional.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done, you wrote about a sensitive subject that has probably affected a number of people, Good on you for writing about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautiful

Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

My 3rd wife never could get over loosing her breasts. She committed suicide via a hack Doctor. Don't kid yourself, when a woman has always had big tits looses them to a mastectomy for cancer it is Devastating. Totally Devastating to her perception of herself, her self image and self confidence. Lumpectomys have the same sucess rates, yet So many Doctors encourage mastectomy and take the whole breasts. Why? More money probably, but it is otally Devastating for the poor Woman. The scars are absolutely gruesome. Well done Sir. Thank You. 5 stars. Well written, Good Topic, Good Story. Thanks, #Buster2U

WordAssociationWordAssociationover 1 year ago

Well done! Both with a sensitive (excuse the pun) subject and using the 750 words so well.

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveabout 1 year ago

How could you make the room so dusty in only 750 words? One of the better love stories I've read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Psychologists strain mightily to de-couple the innate sense of self from the physical image staring back from the mirror; it doesn't take surgery for most of us to feel dissatisfied with our body image--which pairs inextricably with our self esteem. Although the impact varies greatly from individual to individual, there is no denying the reality of it. Kudos to you on a sensitive, moving love story which celebrates the true value of love.

Outstanding. More please.

MLJ

DazzyDDazzyD9 months ago

Long time ago I met a lady at A barI we. Ended up in bed, wow!! She was all woman, but I was shocked when I took off her bra. Yep! Nothing but scars! Nothing was said,(other than moans and groans💕) she was very nice! I felt bad for her, but No biggie.. DD

Calico75Calico758 months ago

Excellent! Amazing for 750 words.

Helen1899Helen18998 months ago

Wonderfully written, a sensitive subject so tastefully done and in 750 words, amazing skill. 5*

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...