All Comments on 'A Ride in the Afternoon'

i thought this story was so sensual...and interestingly written. would love to read a sequel! thanks for posting.

I'm in love with this story. It was hot, sexy and descriptive all rolled into one. All I can say is thank you, and my throbbing clit thanks you too.

Good story, good sex, well told. But I thought the category: "first time" meant virgins losing it; not experienced couples getting it on with each other for the first time.

Wonderful buildup, romantic and so, so hot. Thank you very much!

Writen by a wanker

Why do so many of the writers on Literotica not know how to spell simple words and how to use correct grammar. The words that give me the most irritation are 'to' when it should be 'too' (meaning also), and then the most simple of them all, 'your' when the writer is meaning 'you are', so should write be writing 'you're'.

The daddy of them all is "I should of" instead of "I should have" or "I should've".

The English language is a precious thing and should be written correctly. Once we lose our language we lose our ability to express ourselves. If you don't have the skills to do this, then for fucks sake, get someone to proof read your stories.