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Click hereHe didn't respond at all, just picked up his wine for another gulp. He refilled both our nearly empty glasses in silence.
"I'm sorry, would you mind?" I asked outright, sheer desperation in my head but hopefully not in my voice.
"Oh, no... of course..." he stammered. He sounded nervous. Truthfully we hadn't ever had much physical contact. The occasional hug was it. "Uh, turn around,' he continued as he set his wine glass down.
I picked my glass up and took a sizeable gulp, then set it back down on the coffee table and took my hair out of the ponytail. I smiled at him before I turned around so he could work on my neck, pushing my hair over my left shoulder. I slid closer to him still sitting upright with my back facing him. When I felt his hands on me, my body shuddered.
"Sorry, are my hands cold?" he asked sounding as though he thought he'd fucked up already.
"No, I'm just really tense," I lied.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoA nice start to the story. Good writing and story setup. Looking forward to the continuation of it.
WhoGivesAShitover 2 years agoThis is really good. You’ve established that they’re both interested, and both are being awkward. IMO the chapter could have continued to the next phase of the evening.
Anonymousover 2 years agoGreat story and nice build up.. but am left wanting to read more. Looking forward to more submissions from you!
CJ75over 2 years agoAuthor"your story is just as bad as your pictures on AM pics..
what an embarassment!"
Don't know what would possess you to make it personal here. I usually stop reading stories I'm not enjoying after a couple of paragraphs. Leaving a comment like this says a lot about you.
Anonymousover 2 years agoCJ75
Keep on doing what you are doing, don't let the naysayers get under your skin. Continue writing your story and enjoy what you are creating. It looks as though, by way of the comments, that you have an audience that is looking forward to future chapters, as do I.
Anonymousover 2 years agoThis is one of the shittiest stories I have ever read on Lit.
Don't bother writing anymore stories
zero stars!
