All Comments on 'A Rock in Space Pt. 01'

by Kousakacomplex

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting ...

... response to COVID-19.

A bit pessimistic for my taste, but you write well, so I’d like to see where you take this.

Shane279Shane279almost 4 years ago
Good start

a little weird at first but got good quick. Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Yes, please

Great premise. hope it relaxes you well to write this one.

May the Force be with you kousakacomplex.

Eugenia4allEugenia4allalmost 4 years ago

Dang! More please! Loved it! 5*s

AndreasVonGlatzAndreasVonGlatzalmost 4 years ago
Bitte Weiter schreiben

Das ist super weitere Kapitel Bitte und bitte zu Ende schreiben 🙏

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Aleisha joined

Just use Aleisha as his second lover, another virgin. He has impregnate the girls.

ChessicfaythChessicfaythover 3 years ago
A fun romp.

Its always nice to have some variety. This is a welcome break from your other excellent stories.

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
A very good start!

Very well written and of course very yummy too! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Begining of the Story

The beginning of the story was confusing. There was no reason given why Lucy would go back in time to save a game but not save him, or why the game was important. Also, there was very little delineation from telling him to save and him reawakening. Lastly, he seemed unaffected by a near naked girl in his room. The beginning could use some additional clarity.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaosabout 3 years ago

This is soooo strange! Intresting though, and Steph is a lil cutie! <3

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Kousakacomplex here! My writing is all about romance, and as my name implies (if you're familiar with it) the brother sister love stories are (mostly) where it's at for me. I'm an amateur writer, having written a couple of light novels already, but recently my life has brought...

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