by Kousakacomplex
..that says, "1 star because we got this instead of another chapter of Banished or Trapped In A Game."
BUT it was so good i just couldn't do it.
thank you for your amazing work and please keep writing.
I love this genre, and I love science fiction and fantasy , but most of all I love the way you bring erotica into the story , more please! 5*s
@anon if it helps, I'll most likely be submitting chapter 16 of banished tonight. My apologies though. I found myself in some covid related difficulties last month that have set me back a bit. 😅
I like where this is going, and I'm looking forward to more of it. Thank you!
Everything that he said to Steph about being the most beautiful woman in the world was repeated to Aleshia. The dialogue is quite dorky, as well. Jake is pretty dumb for a 19 yo.
The comment about the main character cheapening his love might be valid but the author did tell us not to take this one too seriously. I think they intended this to be a lighthearted romp focused around sex. With that in mind I don't see any issue with the characters compliments.
I really hope you continue this. So far the characters are developing quite nicely and I can see this could potentially turn into a saga. This was just day one and they have 2 years to save the "human" race. I wonder how many people would be needed to easily repopulate the planet? And I can totally see a world tour of sorts to make sure all the different cultures and ethnicities don't go extinct.
Just a quick question. Once Jake "converts" someone can they convert others or is it just his sperm acting as a catalyst? I'm thinking it might be sexual fluids so as long as some guys down down on the girls they can be converted too.
Here's a fun question for everyone. If this story was true which celebrity(ies) would you try and seduce to save them. And would you stray from your natural orientation to save someone whom you normally wouldn't sleep with. As a straight male i don't think I could cross the bi-line but I would definitely try to sleep with Kevin Hart's wife so he could be saved cause he's just funny as hell.
Aleisha seems cute and all, but I think Steph sounds cuter still c: Also, he was basically in love with Steph, wouldn't being inside her be the best place hes ever been rather than Aleisha?
i really like it and would love to see where it goes...PLEASE keep the story going.
Great story so far. I see it's been a long time since this part came out. I hope you haven't quit on it. I'd really love to see where it goes.