All Comments on 'A Roll in the Hay'

The story is cut off??

Not much of a story yet just an introduction we will have to wait and see where it goes from here

This is a really good start, you write well. But I think you accidentally cut off the second half of the story?

Where's the rest of the story? Did you accidentally submit an earlier save file?

Update: the whole story has been posted!

Loved it! So hot and sweet, almost Biblical in its power. xoxo, Di