All Comments on 'A Royal Impregnation Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fine effort

Cheeky and hot at the same time. Nice new start for you. I was wondering why you had not written for a while. Please don't neglect the other two stories either - Thakur and Binita have not finished already surely. And this story promises to be another hot one.

tripuratripuraover 10 years ago
Who Are You?

How do you do it?

swamivetteswamivettealmost 9 years ago
that's a royal one

Wow... I enjoyed reading. You have what it takes. Keep up the good work. More elaboration will add to build up of tension. Not that you made it fast but you had scope for elaboration which I feel you might have missed. For a reader who is not Indian more fine details will build up the readers exotic part of imagination. Well done. Thank you.

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