by slyc_willie
loved this chapter. Bags is a man, perhaps not a simple one, but he's a man. He's got faults. Viv didn't come across as heartless as I saw her as, thinking of her concern for Eric. I like the reasoning behind her power too. The fight scene excellent and of course how can I not mention the orgasmic blow job scene! Excellent work! ~ Red
Witty and dark, and evil.
Just the way I like them!
Maharat
I love Bagdemagus character, and the touch of vulnerbility in his power only makes him all the more interesting. Well done!
I adore your treatment of Viviane, and the whole story was incredibly gripping!
WOW! The blow job got me wishing...
You are a master of your craft!
The action begins to heat up and conflict begins to arise from both within and without...a great addition!
Beautiful, exciting story, excellent character development, fun to read. The whole series is wonderful. For me to praise it now, some 12 years after all the previous comments, feels like I am bringing it to light after a decade of darkness.