All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 10'

I'm really getting to like the character of John. Simple but crafty, with a noble soul to outmatch his new station. Loved the hints and clues Grams offered, adding more intrigue to the story. Well done, DL.

I'm really happy with how John's life is being flushed out and we're learning more about him. Great addition to the chain. :)

I'm really happy with how John's life is being flushed out and we're learning more about him. Great addition to the chain. :)

I, Too, am glad to get to know John. Grams is cool.

It's a great addition to the chain!

You do such a good job with character development, adding little things in the crack and this is no different.

John is a wonderful, multi-faceted character that really jumps off the page, and Grams just joined those ranks in this story. I absolutely love her, and I hope we get to see her again. The looks into society's prejudice are also well done and really add atmosphere.