All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 12'

chapter. There is a certain appeal to Bags for some folks... hoping the bad guy changes and becomes a likable fellow. Not this fella though... nasty to the core. A great tale and so worth the read. Thanks so much for taking on the responsibility of the bad guy. I look forward to more chapters and perhaps one day, another chain story collaboration with you. ~ Red

Love how you've put Guy in the castle, allowing him to turn his wits to the task of eliminating a potential threat. Will Viv stay banished? Can even those around Evie protect her from such a powerful conspiracy? Only time will tell. Loved the chapter.

a little less when they are that bad.

Anyway, one of my favorite Lit characters. Now, if I can just spell his name right :)

Masterful chapter, moved things along quite a bit.

Maharat

This has been the best chapter yet! And Drest! he grew up. Evelyn has become a stonger character. Well written, thank you!