All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 15'

Another great addition to the story. Keep writing and all the best to you!

The rage of pain and loss come across vividly in this one, DL. Well done, and can't wait to see where things go from here!

Now we are closing in the wizard. I wonder how we will get all these folks in the sack now, that they will be so busy deflecting the wizard's rage!

Gotta get to work,

Maharat

. . . to the wizard himself. Oh, isn't Bagdemagus going to be put out by this. ;) Excellent characterization of Cedric, DL. His rage will serve him well.

Each contributing chapter is another that holds me in awe of the talented writers you all are. You wrote a perfect tale of lost love and anger. Great job! ~ Thank you, Red.