All Comments on 'A Rude Awakening'

An excellent first story, which i really enjoyed. I hope you share some more with us.

More, please.

5*

Tc

Very good story, thank you for sharing with us and hope to see many more from you.

That can't be the only time!!

good start.

afterwards???

Brilliant first story. Can we have more?

why do parents spend so much money or kids borrow so much money for degrees that are worthless for getting a good paying job???

The King of adjectives AND adverbs has been found !

Winderful story, especially with the suggestion of more to follow.

Oh.my. FFFFFFUCK that was hot!!!

Keep going full speed ahead

*****Hot read with a good storyline. Thanks for sharing.

Steaming

Smoking HOT 🔥 5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 Part 2?

Fabulous story. Mom and son showing each other exactly how they felt being together, without a word said between them. Things can only get better. Can't wait for 'Part 2'

Good story. As a romantic, I miss the build-up. The romance, intimacy, and the sensual chemistry between related lovers.

Nice story waithing for chapter 2

Perfect.

Sexy little story, as though you were walking along the street and had a brief glimpse into someone bedroom. Ignore those who want more, you’ll never satisfy everyone. The story is your reward.

Want you to continue with this story I loved it, want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story please continue.

Awesome story you need to continue with Ch 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice. Even nicer if she was risking getting pregnant.

There is having sex and there is mating. Once he tasted his mother's titties and fingered fucked her, he knew

that he had to have her. He knew that he had to mate with her. But at 52 it would be almost impossible for him to make her pregnant.

But whispering into your lover's mouth that the man in you, wishes that he could fuck his baby in you makes a woman super-hot. I was 17 years old when I made love to my aunt. She was divorce and 41 years old. At that moment when I was sliding deep in her and we were one....I whispered to her that the man in me wanted to give her my baby. Man, she fucked me hard and came so hard on my cock coating me with her sweet white nectar.

5 Stars. Great story, I've now read all of your stories, can't wait for more. Like I said before in comments of your other stories, you're extremely talented.

Great story! Would have been better without all the dot dot dots that I have to edit out in order to listen to the story in Text Aloud, text reader but well told story. 5 BIG FUCKING STARS!