by Daniellekitten
If you want to call it that, my only complaint is that each episode is too short, but that's really my problem as I can't wait for the next one. Thanks.
DK the first chapter of this was so frightening I was too scared to comment on it LOL. Gave me the utter willies to be honest with you! But that is the sign of a good writer, being able to scare me witless hehehehe!
Loved this chapter! Really like Nick and Michelle! Very interested to see how they get on together as they work to solve the case :-)
I just know she's gonna get raped or a second before she does Nick "comes out of nowhere" and saves the day...
Another great story in the making. I have written many times about your prowess of weaving interesting story telling and adding heated sexuality in a way that is both titilating and interesting. There are still so few authors on the Literotica venue that can do what you do on a consistent basis. I have been a reader and admirer of your writing for many years and will continue to be for as long as you continue to put "Pen to Paper!!
I, also, hope that all your health issues have been corrected and your are now completely healthy. RJG
First time reading this story chap1 scared the shit out of me but it’s got better have a feeling it’s gonna be a story that will do that