All Comments on 'A Saturday Morning'

quick action and great description

Interesting premise.

Sex moves along too fast, though.

No reluctance at all. No discussion/dialog about what any/each of them would like to see. Or touch. Or how. No instructions about how things should be done. Slower? Faster? Harder? Softer?

Three stars.

Not too bad. Amazing how a play-by-play description can take the excitement out of sex. Thank you, though.

Interesting story but there should probably be a more explicit warning that this story is about incest.