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by harry_saffron

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"That day stays vividly in my memories as I will narrate next, sparing no details."

Wasted line and waste of energy to read it. For this tale, of course you're never going to forget it.

Clearly, writing is not your first language. Find an editor to clean up your errors -- this could be an erotic story.

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I write mostly short stories due the big effort they require from me. I like to iterate over them: I review, print, mark them red, and edit and re-edit. I struggle with prepositions, continuity and other things but I put all the care I can. I hope you get to enjoy any or at l...