All Comments on 'A Schoolgirl's Lust'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
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He fucked one through the fence but her reached over it to rip the others blouse and bra off, fences around school yards are a minimum of six feet high. What school fence line have ever seen wit thick shrubbery around it? The grass was wet but she dropped her panties onto the floor? She stood still long enough for him to take pictures, . How old are you, 14?

Poor first entry, really poor. If this garbage get's a one rating I'll be surprised.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Ouch

Jeez couldn't have taken the virgin first time a bit slower? This was lowkey painful to read rather than an arousing piece. I'd have built the story a lot more (changed a shit ton of things) and put the story under reluctance. 'First Time' stories are much gentler than THIS. Whatever I'm supposed to call it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Grim ... not erotic more distressing

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Naughty Dirty and Disgusting but I loved it!

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Hi, I run my own business and have my own home and car. I am also studying at Uni towards an undergraduate degree. I'm a natural blond ( thanks to my Scandinavian mother), and have a pooch called Benny. I'm not sexually very experienced, but I love the stories on here.