All Comments on 'A Second Chance Ch. 01'

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oneoldmanoneoldmanalmost 4 years ago

Okay! I'mhooked. Please, let's keep it going. Big 5!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
She is going to get screwed and she is doing it to herself.

Empathy for jimmy only.

Beard Marines love them. Another way to take down.

jtwheels

Richard1940Richard1940over 2 years ago

Needs a line in the break in timelines. Also a good idea for the characters to have names starting with different letters, very confusing over the timeline break.

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