All Comments on 'A Second Visit during Office Hours'

by janevalenz

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RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 15 years ago
Some of the best . . .

. . . writing I've seen on Lit. Nice story, well-told. It sounded as if it came from the heart.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
oh my god.

This was absolutely amazing, so well written and smartly done...so nice to read one that isn't about the dumb slut looking for a fuck or the faceless horny old professor. Loved the ending. I'm in this "do I, or don't I" position with my professor, who is exactly like this man. Wow. Loved it. Write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Perfect...

As I read this, I could not shake the feeling of repressed lust. Haven't we all been there? You managed to capture a particular niche of repressed lust - one that the diligent student longs for, but may never receive. Your references to Lawrence were also perfect. It felt as though you wrote this story just for me. Thanks.

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