All Comments on 'A Secret Between In-Laws'

by Austin454

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don87654don87654over 16 years ago
Great. and very natural

Knocked down a notch because there was no baby making.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

Apparently having a wife fuck around on you is a turn on.Good writing,don't much care for your reaction when you find out your a cockold.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It needed one more line.

"Oh, yeah, Baby," I said. "I <i>need</i> to make love to you immediately...especially now that I have shed all that guilt about fucking your sister."

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 16 years ago
Erotic but as a marriage this one is over

The story--as a LW story -- dies right here...

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<i>"Oh my god!" I thought. Now I NEED to know. Whether she was teasing me or not, I was becoming aroused at the thought that she might have been with someone else. "OK....tell me your little story," I said acting slightly interested</i>

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The husband needs to know IF this was Just bedrooom fantasy talk OR if she was telling the truth.

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An Older Guy -Mark-- husband of her older sister yet!!! puts his hand on her pussy and she decides to fuck him.

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The husband reaction? he gets more turned on... so she now knows that she can cheat whenver she wants to b/c the super wimp Hubby cant tell the difference between fantasy and reality

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
yeah sweety

now tell mark that he has to get his wife and daughters to fuck me ...or hey dear well just tell them all and have some fun ...im sorry if it was me and even if he says it excites him ...if my brouther in law did me that way and my wife told me ...well id tell her she better tell mark to ante up because as far as im concerned he fucked over me and dis respected me ...now its his turn to pay ...the best way would be to turn over a nice looking daughter as im sure his wife is way to old looking t obe a true fair trade ...either that or a dozen dates with some very expensive escorts ...and lol after all what can his dear wife say or do but tell him have fun dear ...oh and id make sure the dear wife stayed home id be afraid mark might want her again ...matter of fct id tell her that if she stayed away from home ever again id better be with her or id say mark better be supplying me with some daughter pussy ...or at least some very young pussy ....id make him dread the day he ever saw me ...id be the best brother in law he ever had the pleasure of getting fucked by ...just as he ddi me ...as for my dear wife id let her get her pussy eat by the woman he provided also ...as she may have some fun being shes the whore she is

zed0zed0over 16 years ago
Pretty Erotic...

... for a wimp story. I hate wimps & wimp stories, makes real men look bad.

Gary_LostGary_Lostover 16 years ago
Cuckold husband

I don't like cuckold/wimp stories but the writing was not to bad. So I will give it a 25.

toffytoffyover 16 years ago
fun

my sister in law once touched and stroked my cock at a family wedding. i responded by kissing her and stroking her near her pussy. we talked about taking it further but sanity took over. i later felt guilty until my wife asked me with a smile how i enjoyed getting to know her sister. it was a one time thing, but my sil and my wife still tease me about it 20 years later about what "might have been" damn, she still makes me horny.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good Story

I liked the build up in the story and how she could be manipulated by another man. I would have liked more details about when he came on her. How his hot cum coated her tits and one shot landed on her face, and chin as he pushed his cock into her mouth. I'd like to know the rest of the story. It seems like she has more to tell.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
Fair

A cheating wife and an unknowing and unwilling cuckold.

Call the fucking lawyers, time to end this abortion of a marriage.

FUCK

Huedogg2Huedogg2almost 12 years ago
no need to call the lawyer till she fucks his dad

what a fucking whore, and the brother & husband are as dumb as the fucking slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I suppose the long winded seduction sequence was the entire plot line

A real half assed story leaves far more questions to be answered than were answered in the story. Bottom line she is a cheating slut who showed no remorse for what she allowed the brother in law to do to her. She also wasn't satisfied with just one fuck with Mark she let it go on. Mark asked her to not tell anyone so for 3 years she protected Mark and herself from others finding out adulterers the two of them were. She in a completely selfish vein did not tell her own loving husband what a slut she was for 3 years.

rixelsrixelsover 10 years ago
Another one?

Austin, you gave us a well written tale, but please put your skills to better use. The brother in law seduces his wife and he doesn't want to hurt anyone? How about kicking that asshole's balls to pulp and then challenge the SOB to mention the altercation to anyone.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Where did it all go?

No, not the marriage, the guys blown load :)) I hate this cuck shit, but you did a grrreat job of stringing us along and building up the sexual tension. The little cheating bitch should have had a few hot streams spraying her wittle sun dress! Ha ha. I would have painted the rear windshield if that were me. You dropped the ball on an epic cumshot :))

RePhilRePhilover 8 years ago
Just put the pillow over her face

And press down. She'll struggle for a minute or so but will soon stop

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yep

She's a cheating cunt, best to be rid of her asap.

DrSemblanceDrSemblanceover 7 years ago

Cheating cunt and submissive cuck husband and douchebag brother

Gets hard hearing how he was betrayed and disrespected.

Fucking sub wanker.

Probably the author's own life story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Haha

Stupid husband is going to be eating Marks cum for many more years, fuck his wife must hate his wimpy ass and love putting one over on her sister. Going to turn to shit when Marks wife finds out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

fag cuck shit.

widowedidiotwidowedidiotabout 6 years ago
Mark?

Either your wife is lying or she just takes you for a fool. What she considers accidents were not actually accidents they are called opportunities. Mark was creating opportunities for himself to catch her in compromising positions. We caught my brother-in-law trying the same thing with my late wife until my sister confronted him and told him that we were not stupid and that if he really believed nobody had noticed how he would follow my wife around trying to make opportunities. anyway what I hate about this story and I've mentioned it on many other stories, "it was more than one time, but it wasn't an affair." she said. Why put that in if you're not going to expand on it? What are the chances of my finding the follow up and find out the answer? with as many stories as they are here I'll probably never see any of your stories again. it was a waste of time reading your story. Oh I liked every thing in there I loved the storyline and even your writing. But leaving out the rest of the story killed it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Need more stories like this

5 stars.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 4 years ago
No.

She's just a common cheat.

iameaseliameaselalmost 3 years ago

Shes a cheating cunt.

this was fucking funny as hell..."Yes, but I need to tell you what happened. It's not what you think."

Yes it was exactly what he and the rest of us thought.

Another pathetic story for the spank squad with a wimp husband.

shang40shang40almost 3 years ago

One of my cousin was sick so I went to meet. We talked during evening and after dinner my sis in law gave him his tablets. He slept and talk between we continued.

The subject turned to sex. My sis in law made some tricks and I pulled her to me. And we kissed a lot.

Her eyes showed hunger so I scooped her and took to the other bedroom. In just few minutes we were nude kissing touching each other. I sucked her boobs and then opened her lovely thighs and licked her hard.

Later we had solid sex.

Next day in bathroom we did.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So here we are again. The wifey says it was three years ago, i doesnt really matter honey, it was three years ago. I'm yours today, let me suck your cock and placate you and continue to make a fool of you. I had my fun honey, i fucked the guy, shit on our marriage and didrespected you and our vows and the family and our children and placed apl the family in a very bad situation. So heres what needs to happen. He plays along, gets her in bed again about a week later, takes her through the same situation, loving her and making it exciting foe her to tell the story, tbis time recording it all. Then get all the finances in order, make it a special occasion to go see the kinfolks and get all the adults in the same room and play the recording in front of them all, then serve the bitch with divorce papers and walk out. Women think of honey he didnt hurt my pussy, see its still there, it still works, and i still fucked around on you, bur we're good and its over, now lay down and lick your nuts and be a good cuckold. But dont you dare fuck another woman, that is adultry.

iameaseliameaselabout 2 years ago

Wow a totally closeted gay writer wrote a strictly by the numbers cuck stories. Its funny your mental illness literally doesnt allow any of you to gain the ability to write a decent story regardless of the subject.

One and done would have been better for your career kid.

lc69hunterlc69hunter12 months ago

iameasel has a mental illness

lc69hunterlc69hunter12 months ago

I do NOT like the ending

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