All Comments on 'A Secret Even to Myself Ch. 02'
by TalyisBagley
- 4 Comments
Anonymousabout 7 years agoMessy, yes, but interesting. A bit of A Taming of the Shrew. You have me playing connect-the-dots from plot points you've dropped. Please keep it going.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoJust sounds like she has been sentenced to a high security prison for dangerous criminals, the rules would be the same.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThe misspelling and grammar is frustratingly distracting. To Brigid the first paragraph with her name spelt incorrectly was ridiculous. I had to stop and check if I had it wrong but nope - sloppy mistakes everywhere which trumps the story unfortunately.
TalyisBagleyabout 7 years agoAuthorI decided to change her name when I started to post this story (chapter 1). I never really settled on a name for the characters. The MC's name has changed a lot from draft to draft and Malin was the last one. The day I started to publish this story I found Mahin which has a interesting meaning for the character. A few Malins may slip through here and there.
I am still writing this story as I go so I am not sure where it will land. I do plan to go back and clean it up...it if it's a good journey.
-Talyis
PS I owe you two chapters.
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