All Comments on 'A Secret Even to Myself Ch. 03'

I'm enjoying the heck out of your take on this classic story line. I'm also laughing at myself at how intensely I want to take a red pencil to it until it is a graffiti masterpiece. :D. Keep tossing it at us as it comes, Taylis!

... I love the storyline and think you're doing a great job with the 1 a week commitment, I just wish you checked it once before posting!

I understand you said it was going to be messy but there's nothing wrong with proofreading before you publish. Just read over it out loud a couple of times to catch the big mistakes.