All Comments on 'A Secret Memory'

It’s a great story but it is in need of some editing. It could very easily have been a five star story.

I would be happy to volunteer my services as a proof reader.

Tender. Loving. Hot!

Such a naughty, sexy, lovely story...delicious! More like this please!x

That was 🔥

Loved it right up until the part about it being one time only. Why, for heaven sakes. I'd make it one time every two days or so, till I was dead.

very erotic little sex tale,,well written because its you!,,had me right to the end,,a one time thing? not bloody likely! lolol.

Absolutely first rate. Great writing style . . .